Thinking about the field trips that I have had in this four years, my favourite one was the field trip to Huasco two years ago (P), and the subject (SM, was) related with it was (NN, it was) (SM, the) cultural geography. Personally that subject is very boring for me, but the trip (SM, field) was really good, I enjoyed a lot with my classmates knowing a (NN, a) different place (WF, places). The reason that (NN: that) turn that (WW: turn that) this field trip becomes in my favourite one it's (NN: it) because I didn't know nothing of the North of Chile (P), and too (WW: too) also because I had a chance to see other point of view about (SM: of) the geography. When we arrived to Huasco, I enjoyed of (NN: of) a great view of a really beautiful landscape, before going (WT: going) to go there I believed that the North of Chile was a totally desert, but the (WW: the) in reality was more like an Oasis. The duration of the field trip was about four days, (P) and the principal work that we did there was asking somethings to the people of Huasco related with (WW: with) to their life quality. During the day, (P) the ground (WW: ground) field trip was all (WW: all) only work, hard work and dedication, but at night despite (NN: night despite) the evenings we enjoyed incredible nights with my friends in a beautiful scenery and the clearest skies (WF: skies) sky on (WW: on) of the planet.
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Thinking about the field trips that I have had in this four years, my favourite one was the field trip to Huasco two years ago, and the subject was related with the cultural geography. Personally that subject is very boring for me, but the field trip was really good, I enjoyed a lot with my classmates knowing different places. The reason this field trip becomes in my favourite one is because I didn't know nothing of the North of Chile, and also because I had a chance to see other point of view about of the geography. When we arrived to Huasco, I enjoyed a great view of a really beautiful landscape, before to go there I believed that the North of Chile was a totally desert, but the in reality was more like an Oasis. The duration of the field trip was about four days, and the principal work that we did there was asking somethings to the people of Huasco related to their life quality. During the day, the field trip was only work, hard work and dedication, but at night despite the evenings we enjoyed incredible nights with my friends in a beautiful scenery and the clearest sky on of the planet.
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